Keith Short's The Butterfly Wheel, a thriller with many twists and turns set in and around Cheltenham and Gloucester, is now available as an ebook after the paperback was published at the end of 2022. Keith Short is a an author who has used our critique and editing services for all his novels, but most especially for this one, where his talent is wonderfully evident in an unusual and gripping story. The Butterfly Wheel is a not your average crime novel. The protagonist is a Jake-the-lad whose motorbike accident at the outset puts him in a wheelchair. Yet Jake, recovering his old...

UPDATE ON THE BLACKSHIRT THRILLERS Late 2024   In autumn 2024 Level Best Books published Blackshirt Rebellion, the third in the Agents of Room Z trilogy by Jason Monaghan about a spy planted in the fascist movement in England in the 1930s. It takes history and gives it a bit of a shake, but always in a way that takes the avid reader along for a thoughtful as well as breathtaking ride with Hugh, Sissy and friends. However it was the second book in the series, Blackshirt Conspiracy, published in 2023, where Fiction Feedback undertook a lot of the editing, although as...

Fiction Feedback has launched Crafting Crime, an online crime writing course with award-winning author and editor Martin Edwards. The course comprises 12 modules and is aimed at potential crime writers with a certain level of experience who would like to learn alone and study independently. There are no classroom sessions, no need to review the work of peers and no other writers commenting on your own work. However, all writers receive a critique of their novel opening and synopsis from Fiction Feedback as part of the couse. The modules are complemented by podcasts where Martin and Dea Parkin, Editor-in-chief of Fiction Feedback...

Fiction Feedback has added a new critique service for submissions of the opening of a novel - whether it's to an agent or publisher, or for a competition. The word count is a maximum 5,000. This might for instance include 3,000 words of the novel and a 1,500-word synopsis. Tip: Please do check carefully what word count the agent, publisher or competition wants, and submit accordingly. Don't assume they'll be OK with a few words over the specified maximum: it's often not the case. Find details and prices here. To send your novel extract in for critique, simply attach it to an email....

We have launched our book marketing course, BookMarketingPro, the first course Fiction Feedback has offered. It's one-to-one, and tailored to your writing, your experience and your aspirations and marketing aptitudes. For more, see Resources. Email us: info@lisat148.sg-host.com Photo: Anna Caig (L) and Dea Parkin, Editor-in-Chief at Fiction Feedback ...

Maybe you’ve not finished your novel yet, but you’re sensibly looking ahead. Or maybe your novel is completed and edited, your cover designed, the book ready to go. Maybe you have an agent and contract, maybe you’re publishing independently....

Writing a query letter is tricky, striking the crucial balance between informing and persuading. Hard facts rather than verbosity are your best ally here and these are the points an agent or publisher will look for you to cover in your query letter....

Writers  can benefit from expert assistance when it comes to submissions and we're delighted to offer that help. First, please check that you've done the following. Check using the agent or publisher's website (not just the entry in Writers' & Artists' Yearbook, which can quickly be out of date) that they are accepting submissions, and are interested in your kind of work. Identify the best individual to contact. Check that you've tailored your submission to exactly what they ask for. Look for what they need; usually the opening of your MS, a synopsis and a covering letter but several agents and publishers ask...